The Turtle-Girl From East Pukapuka
Another trailer for a friend…
Here is a recent blog post about book trailers, plus the other two trailers I’ve done…
Another trailer for a friend…
Here is a recent blog post about book trailers, plus the other two trailers I’ve done…
As usual, the Flash Fiction Challenge was held tonight.
The rules… You have 90 mins to write something related to the prompt given. You have ONLY 90 mins to write and edit your new piece.
Tonight’s prompt was The Knock.
Here is what I ended up with…*warning for bad language*
***So this prompt gave me an idea for a YA thriller. I had to stop midway to write it all down.
Yay! (But the flash may have suffered with less time for it…
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Shelley sat in the only non-broken chair in the run down practice room for the orchestra geeks, running her fingers in and out of her hair while watching Benji.
She whispered, “We’re supposed to wait until we hear the knock.”
Benji kept his hand pressed against the door, but turned his head to whisper back, “Yeah, I know, but we’ve been waiting all damn day. It can’t be that bad.”
Rob rested his chin on the carpet, his forty-fifth push-up complete, and spoke louder than he should. “I’m not going to test it. You saw the way Jimmy’s eyes looked! Nothing scares that kid and he practically shit his pants in front of us.”
Shelley kicked out and landed the heel of her boot in Rob’s shin. “Man, you’re so articulate.”
Smacking her leg away, Rob jumped up, saying, “And you’re so flat chested.”
She threw her pen at him and started to yell, “Screw you”, when Benji waved his arms around to stop her.
“Shut up! Did you hear that? Was that the knock?”
Shelley said, “I didn’t hear anything over Rob’s damn –”
Benji moved to cover her mouth and stare her into silence.
Rob whispered, “I thought I heard it, too.”
Benji gave Shelley one last stare down before uncovering her mouth and wiping his hand on his jeans to remove her lipstick. He said, “You?”
Shelley rolled her eyes and nodded. “Yeah, I heard something. But it sounded more like scratching. I don’t think that was it.”
Rob practically bounced to the door and said, “So what? We wait another eight hours for nothing? I’m going.”
Benji hesitated and looked down at Shelley. “I don’t know. I’m not convinced, either.”
Rob pulled his dad’s pistol from his bag and said, “I don’t need help.”
Shelley stifled a snort and Benji started forward, saying, “I’m not going, yet. And either we all go or none of –”
Rob crouched in preparation and said, “Cut it out, boy scout. Your mama ain’t here.” He grabbed the door handle and turned back to smirk. “Though I wish she were. Your mom’s a total MILF and I bet she’d do me after I take care of this.”
Benji stopped a few feet away and crossed his arms with a harsh, “Fine. Go.”
Rob turned the handle as Shelley darted to Benji’s side, trying to hide herself in his shadow.
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Becky stood on the other side of the door, gun in her hand and extra bullets in her pocket just in case. Jimmy had said this is where they would be keeping him. All she had to do was knock and then pull the trigger when they came out to investigate. It would be easier if she weren’t shaking too much to make a fist. Her first attempt was a failure. She only managed to scrape her fingernails along the trim before jerking back in fear.
The door handle started to move and Becky’s arm got a little more straight. Aim between the eyes. That made the most sense.
My ninth feature focuses on Damien Walters Grintalis, a writer I met through the forums on AW, but who I got to know better from Twitter. (Yes, yes. A Twitter mention again.
) Damien is all sorts of cool. She’s such a fun person to talk with, but she’s also one of the top people I would go to for writing or query advice. No kidding, she gives crazy good crits on queries.
Damien’s talent is obvious to anyone smart enough to pause and check her out. Her story ideas are unique and I’ve even noticed how good she is at giving titles to stories/novels. (And believe me, it’s a hard thing to do. Hence my MS titles: Mallory’s Story and Hayes’ Story. Lame.
) But like my other featured writers, she is more than a talent. Damien is a friend and a positive support for those around her. Check out her blog and get to know her. Really.
Let’s see what it looks like from Damien’s point of view when writing…
Now for some get to know you questions…
What genre of writing do you focus on?
Dark fiction/horror.
Tell us about your current writing project.
The manuscript currently out on submission with editors, Ink, is about a man, a tattoo, and a sailor. Sort of. I don’t want to divulge too many details about my other projects, but the one I’m currently editing involves a disfigured woman and a haunted photo album.
What is your biggest writing related goal?
I’d love to see my work on a shelf at a bookstore, but even more than that, I’d love to know that my work resonated with a reader and took them someplace far away for a time. I’d love it if my characters felt as real to a reader as the characters do in my favorite books. My biggest personal goal is to constantly improve my wordcraft and storytelling skill. I don’t ever want to grow stagnant or become complacent with my own words. I can always grow as a writer. Always.
What’s the biggest thing you’ve learned since focusing on your writing?
Writing a first draft is the easy part. Taking that draft and turning it into something other people might want to read is where it gets tough. It can take a while before you get it to that point, so you have to learn to be patient and not rush through your edits and revisions. That patience will help, too, once you start traversing the wild world of the publishing industry.
If you could have chosen your own name, other than the one you go by now, what would it be?
Nope, I think I’ll keep mine instead; I rather like it.
If you were to get a tattoo for your first published work, what would the tattoo be?
I love tattoos and celebrated accepting agent representation with my third tattoo, the phrase Once upon a time on my forearm. If Ink sells, I plan to have the phrase A paper tiger to swallow me whole tattooed on the opposite forearm and a griffin inked on my upper left arm.
If I saw you at a Halloween party, what would you most likely be dressed as?
Hmm…maybe a belly dancer.
Song dedication of the day for Damien is: (Ok. I have two. Because my brain isn’t working tonight and I can’t decide.) First, The Exorcist Theme Song. Why? Because it’s my namesake and Damien once mentioned it on her blog as a great scary movie song. AND All These Things That I’ve Done by The Killers — as so wonderfully suggested by Harley. On Twitter. Yep.
My eighth feature focuses on Don Pizarro, another writer I met through Twitter. Yes, another.
Don is the guy you would always want at the party, spinning the most random tunes and passing around the most random drinks. I think a shared love for Genoa salami was the first thing that bonded me with Don.
No joke. After that, it was the love for writing, music, and mutual friends. Don is a great friend and very talented, but his dedication is just as impressive. I can’t tell you how many times I see him (via Twitter) writing in his spare minutes, no matter where he might be. Just read his own disclaimer about his writing space:
(A note about my writing environment)
Writing happens anywhere and everywhere I can sit with my netbook, my Moleskine, a Mirado Black Warrior #2 pencil, and a caffeinated beverage. Work retreats, coffee shops, book stores, friends’ homes… anywhere.
Let’s see what it looks like from Don’s point of view when writing…
Now for some get to know you questions…
What genre of writing do you focus on?
I write short stories where I try to play around with fantasy, sci-fi, and recently, horror conventions.
Tell us about your current writing project.
Right now, I’m doing something a little out of my comfort zone, a horror(ish)-erotica story. Mind you, it’s my second attempt, the first being a piece that’s going to appear in the anthology Rigor Amortis. So maybe it’s not so far out of my comfort zone, after all.
Y’know, I’m not sure how I feel about that…
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What is your biggest writing related goal?
To write and publish enough short stories to one day, maybe a decade or three from now, have a phone book-sized compilation of The Complete Short Fiction of Don Pizarro released.
What’s the biggest thing you’ve learned since focusing on your writing?
That how much–or how little–I write on any given day is entirely up to me. And only me. Period.
If you could have chosen your own name, other than the one you go by now, what would it be?
See, knowing me, I probably would’ve chosen poorly, like one of those girl’s names that used to be boy’s names back in the day. Like, Marion, or Leslie, or Carroll. So, I’m more than happy to stick with Don, thank you very much.
If you were to get a tattoo for your first published work, what would the tattoo be?
I’d get one of a character from my first published story, “The Evil of the Recidivist” called The Typhoid Monger. Not that I ever describe what the character looks like, but still–doesn’t that just sound cool?
If I saw you at a Halloween party, what would you most likely be dressed as?
The creepy Burger King.
Song dedication of the day for Don is: Head to Toe by Lisa Lisa and Cult Jam Why? Because it was in his head the other day. Example of our wonderfully random Don.
My seventh feature focuses on Mercedes Yardley, a writer I met through Twitter. (Noticing how cool Twitter is yet?
) Mercedes is that girl in high school other girls wanted to be more like. Confident, beautiful, talented and completely down to earth. She’s a sweetheart with a bite, the little horror writing vixen that she happens to be.
She does everything with style and professionalism, while keeping genuine connections with her colleagues. I am blessed to call Mercedes a friend and I hope you all visit her site to learn more about her.
Psst..and QueryTracker is going to interview her for their Success Story section soon.
Awesome, I tell you.
Let’s see what it looks like from Mercedes’ point of view when writing…
Now for some get to know you questions…
What genre of writing do you focus on?
I call it “whimsical horror”. I like to write about dark subjects in a light manner. I write about sorrow and loss but the focus is usually beauty and hope. I also do nonfiction as well, but fiction is my true love. It’s so free and limitless.
Tell us about your current writing project.
I’m currently working on a memoir about my son’s rare genetic syndrome. I’m hoping to finish the rough draft by September 1st. I have three or four other things in the works, but this is what I really want to focus on at the moment. It’s such a necessary piece to write, and I’m so close to finishing. I’m just going to sprint screaming across the finish line.
What is your biggest writing related goal?
I want to write a story that really means something to somebody. I want to receive a handwritten letter where a reader says, “Wow, this changed things for me.” I think back to all of the books that really impacted me and made me look at life in a different way. I’d love to touch somebody’s psyche like that.
What’s the biggest thing you’ve learned since focusing on your writing?
You can’t do everything well all of the time. If I’m writing really well, then the house goes. If I’m focusing on my manuscript, then my social life goes. I’m lucky enough that the people close to me understand this. “Hey, I’m really in the zone with my manuscript, so you’re not going to hear from me for three days!” My friends are cool with it. My husband definitely understands it. When I’m focused on something, I go full-throttle. It’s necessary to let other things fall by the wayside temporarily.
If you could have chosen your own name, other than the one you go by now, what would it be?
I love my name! It took me a while to grow into it; I went by Sadie until I was twelve. I have a ton of nicknames. A lot of people call me Jei. It works for me.
If you were to get a tattoo for your first published work, what would the tattoo be?
My first piece was called “Show Your Bones” and it was originally published in the Vestal Review. It ran as a reprint in The Shine Journal. If I were to choose from this piece, it would probably be a small rib on my right hip. But if I were to choose from what I hope will be my first published novel, I’d do a small star and a yellow jonquil on the back of my left shoulder.
If I saw you at a Halloween party, what would you most likely be dressed as?
I usually do something fairly dark and slinky. Vampires, broken dolls. I’ve been Malice in Wonderland quite a bit. I have a thing for aprons and butcher knives.
*”I have a thing for aprons and butcher knives.” – Might be the best quote so far… *
Song dedication of the day for Mercedes is: Agony from Into The Woods (Because we’ve song it more than once to each other on Twitter AND she tends to put her main characters through agony.) Btw, Into The Woods is one of my fav musicals ever. You must see it. The one with Bernadette Peters.
My sixth feature focuses on Jamey Stegmaier, a writer I met through Twitter. Jamey is a not just a writer, but a cat lover, marketing guru, founder of an independent publishing company, blogger of all sorts, and a friend. Did I leave anything out? Yep. He’s a guy that does it all, with a smile and what seems like unstoppable energy. His talents are diverse enough to be annoying in their awesomeness.
How could I not be his friend? I’m happy to have gotten the chance to know him well. (And we both enjoy thermostats set to 78 or above. People like us have to stick together.)
So yeah, Jamey is an all around great guy with an affinity for cookies. Check out his blog when you get a chance.
Let’s see what it looks like from Jamey’s point of view when writing…
Now for some get to know you questions…
What genre of writing do you focus on?
Speculative fiction.
Tell us about your current writing project.
It involves tunnels. I don’t know much more than that yet.
What is your biggest writing related goal?
To be a published novelist.
What’s the biggest thing you’ve learned since focusing on your writing?
There’s nothing better than the feeling of finishing a story.
If you could have chosen your own name, other than the one you go by now, what would it be?
Genghis Khan. I don’t think there’s any name cooler than that. Heads would
turn.
If you were to get a tattoo for your first published work, what would the tattoo be?
I wouldn’t get a tattoo. Sorry, I know, that’s not fun, but I’m just not a
tattoo guy. I would, however, get a microchip implant in my arm that
contained the song Carmina Burana: O Fortuna. You know, to play when I walk
into the room.
If I saw you at a Halloween party, what would you most likely be dressed as?
A Top Gun wingman.
Song dedication of the day for Jamey is: Lisztomania by Phoenix because we both appreciate great bands. And I’m bitter I didn’t see this band in concert like he did. *Shakes fist at Jamey*
My fifth feature focuses on Cole Alpaugh, a writer I met through the writing forum AW. ( The best forum.
) Meet Cole, the biggest help I’ve had for my own writing. Though we write very differently at times, we found that we respected and enjoyed each others’ pieces. He’s a wonderful person with a big heart and huge talent. He’s a friend and mentor to me. I aspire to write more like him — that is, when I’m not in tears of laughter from his great sense of humor.
Let’s see what it looks like from Cole’s point of view when writing…
Now for some get to know you questions…
What genre of writing do you focus on?
I’m told I write something called tragicomedy. It’s commercial fiction where characters chase butterflies into traffic and suffer road rage from cannibals in speed boats. My daughter refuses to read anything I write unless I promise the character doesn’t die or get maimed in the piece.
Tell us about your current writing project.
The first draft of my fourth MS is nearly finished. It’s the story of a gifted teacher who is used by his students as a means of escaping terrible lives at home. They describe their town as a place where “being smart is much worse than being retarded. At least someone makes the bully stop punching the ‘tard.”
Other converging story lines include two Fijian crank dealers, a six-foot redhead gold digger, a corrupt Bolivian general, and a lovely pre-op transsexual named Penny Starr. Oh, and the son of the late Shark-God pops in and out when his dates go bad.
What is your biggest writing related goal?
To make a living as a novelist.
What’s the biggest thing you’ve learned since focusing on your writing?
How easy it is to write a book — not necessarily a good, salable book, but a book. I’ve always been a journalist/photographer. I’ve never had a job that wasn’t writing or taking pictures. But I’d always looked at an 80k word project as something to someday do once, like a hundred mile ultra marathon. I found, though, that with a decent work ethic, a novel comes together pretty easily. The trick, of course, is to make the story great.
If you could have chosen your own name, other than the one you go by now, what would it be?
All the awesome names are taken. One of my former players (I coach soccer) is named Matthew Bond. The kid is an amazing athlete and his last name is Bond. He’s just destined to someday knock up the prom and homecoming queens. And a couple hot teachers, too.
I guess if really pressed, I’d go with Adolph Bond. You meet people at parties and they’d look at you funny, not sure which way to go with that first impression.
If you were to get a tattoo for your first published work, what would the tattoo be?
Well, the book cover my daughter drew for THE BEAR IN A MUDDY-TUTU is of a dancing bear in a pink tutu and a butterfly. I guess I could pull that off and not get my ass kicked too much if I stop shaving and carry a six pack around. So, yeah, I’ll probably get that as a tramp stamp.
If I saw you at a Halloween party, what would you most likely be dressed as?
That’s easy. I ALWAYS go as Jason Voorhees from Friday the 13th. The original movie was shot just up the road from where I went to high school…heck, it’s called Voorhees High School. We were the Voorhees Vikings, but tried to get it changed to the Impalers. The mascot murals wouldn’t have had to be changed all that much…just slap on some hockey masks.
*And in case you missed it, here is the book trailer I did for Cole’s first novel.*
Song dedication of the day for Cole is: Pictures of You by The Cure (Cause we both love the band and it’s a great song for Cole.
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My fourth feature is focusing on J. Koyanagi, another writer that I met through Twitter. She’s unbelievably cool and gorgeous, too! (No, really. Even her eyes would make you stare.
) J. Koyanagi is the type of writer who genuinely cares about her fellow writing colleagues while being modest in her own amazing talent. You will see her books in stores one day. Yep. Pretty much, she’s all-around awesome.
Let’s see what it looks like from J’s point of view when writing…

Now for some get to know you questions…
What genre of writing do you focus on?
Adult science fiction.
Tell us about your current writing project.
I tend toward not giving out much information about my novels until they’re at the query stage, mainly because anything can change until the final (pre-representation) draft is complete. I’ll share a little, though.
My current WIP’s working title is Omphalos, and takes place on a semi-distant future Earth in the only remaining human city. The world outside is a wasteland that breeds rusted, hollow demons who scratch at the city’s shield. Citizens of Omphalos are protected by incarnate gods, as well as the “divine sparks” that prevent injury, aging, or unintentional death, and turn human flesh into living art. Beauty and pleasure are devotional concepts; in Omphalos, anything else, any other way of being, would equate to apostasy.
As for the plot, the novel opens with the main character, Ember, confronting her grandfather’s reincarnated murderer. Given the nature of life in Omphalos, the mysterious circumstances of his death have haunted Ember all her life; now that she’s identified his killer, she’s looking for answers. Of course, the truth takes her to places she never could have anticipated.
I realize I’m being a bit vague; sorry about that! I hope to have an actual teaser summary available on my website in the next month or two, when I’m ready to query. I also realize my description makes it sound more like fantasy than science fiction, but that’s because it’s an immersive story. Perspective is everything. Citizens of Omphalos don’t realize their luxuries are the product of technology (for the most part, anyway).
What is your biggest writing related goal?
Right now, I’m focusing on securing representation and publication through a major imprint.
More idealistically, I want my stories to mean something to the people who read them. If only a handful of my readers walk away questioning something vital to them, something uncomfortable and real, then I’ll have done my job.
What’s the biggest thing you’ve learned since focusing on your writing?
Superlative questions are always tough for me! Let’s see. Probably that the stories with the most potential for greatness will lacerate you on their way out. They take you to raw and vulnerable places and force you to trust your instincts. You fight for them because they deny you the luxury of self-conscious restraint.
If you could have chosen your own name, other than the one you go by now, what would it be?
I loved Margaret Atwood’s Oryx and Crake, and it was the first novel to come to mind when I read this question. My given name is fine– I really don’t mind it– but if I had to choose another name, I’d want it to be unusual and androgynous. I’ll go with Oryx.
If you were to get a tattoo for your first published work, what would the tattoo be?
I actually do plan to get a half-sleeve comprised of imagery from my first published novel, whenever it happens. All of my tattoos are hallmarks of accomplishments or major milestones in my life. I’m hoping that debut novel is Omphalos, but I guess we’ll see!
If I saw you at a Halloween party, what would you most likely be dressed as?
If money is no object (and in daydreams, that’s how it should be), you’d find me dressed as one of the Fremen from Frank Herbert’sDune– luminescent eyes and all, a Khepri from China Miéville’s Perdido Street Station, or Lily in her black gown from the film Legend.
Song dedication of the day for J is: She Blinded Me with Science by Thomas Dolby Why? Because she’s a hot nerd, of course!
*And Lily from Legend? Oh, my. This is why we are friends. Great answer.
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My third feature is focusing on Miranda Kenneally, a writer that I met through Twitter. She’s got to be one of the most fun and interesting people I’ve had the chance to know online. I had the pleasure of passing new pages back and forth with her and I can tell you that this chick knows her stuff! And she’s on her way to being published.
(An agent was already smart enough to snag her.)
Let’s see what it looks like from Miranda’s point of view when writing…
Now for some get to know you questions…
What genre of writing do you focus on?
YOUNG ADULT
Tell us about your current writing project.
CONTEMPORARY YA ROMANTIC COMEDY.
What is your biggest writing related goal?
PUBLICATION, AND BEING AT PEACE WITH MY WRITING STYLE.
What’s the biggest thing you’ve learned since focusing on your writing?
IT’S A LOT HARDER THAN IT LOOKS, AND IT TAKES A LOT OF HARD WORK.
If you could have chosen your own name, other than the one you go by now, what would it be?
LEIGH GLENWOOD
If you were to get a tattoo for your first published work, what would the tattoo be?
THE STAR TREK INSIGNIA
If I saw you at a Halloween party, what would you most likely be dressed as?
COMMANDER DATA? or LORD VOLDEMORT?